Six Sentence Sunday: Just a Few Wedding Day Jitters #sixsunday

Welcome back to another Six Sentence Sunday.  Since I am still in the process of querying The Call of the Sea, I decided to stick with the tale for another weekly posting. This week we get a peak at Daniel as he prepares to wed Ellie.

Daniel stood beside the vicar with Nelson and tried to keep his breathing slow and even. He watched the door to the captain’s quarters so intently his eyes watered. His weight shifted left to right as he adjusted his cravat for the third time in the past minute. What if she changes her mind?

“Would you relax,” Nelson whispered, poking Daniel in the rib with an bony elbow. “Your fidgeting is making me nervous.”

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About Rebecca Hart

Im a single parent of three and a published author of romance in all sorts of sub-genres. A full time IT geek, Managing Editor of Roane Publishing, cover artist and a reformed gaming addict -- I live to write fantasy peppered with a dash of romantic nonsense :P Addicted to all things pirates, penguins, Johnny Depp and rum. Follow me on Twitter: @Rebelhart69

Posted on January 8, 2012, in #sixsunday, Call of the Sea, Fiction, Paranormal Romance, Six Sentence Sunday and tagged , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. Hehe. *I* feel nervous for him! Nice six!

  2. Great POV for this. Loved it. Good luck with the querying.

  3. aaw, love a nervous bridegroom! Great 6!

  4. But he should be nervous! Getting married’s a big thing!

  5. How SWEET, I love the groom’s reaction on his wedding day.

  6. That’s a fun relationship between the two friends. Great writing!

  7. *sigh!* Daniel is so endearing here, I love how you show this side of him. Very nice six 🙂

  8. This is so REAL. I love it!

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